Tuesday, September 18, 2012

Best Hook Ever


In the comments section, leave your best "hook" from the "Little Red Riding/Fish Hooks" lesson.  You can comment on others' hooks if you like them, too!  If you've forgotten how to post, click on the "How to Blog" tab above for a reminder of what to do and how to do it! 
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41 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 20, 2012 at 1:09 PM

    Start with a metaphor.
    Start with an adjective.
    Start with an interesting question.

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  2. Megan McDermottSeptember 20, 2012 at 1:29 PM

    Hey, "Anonymous," I actually need you to write your hook... not the type of hook! I want your first sentence! Post again! And don't forget to put your name in! If you've forgotten how, look at the "how to blog" tab!

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 20, 2012 at 2:56 PM

    Start with an interesting metaphor or simile.

    Elementary school is like walking in to a dark cave, you never know what will happen.
    -Caleb Norton

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  4. Luis LopezSeptember 20, 2012 at 3:01 PM

    I was weasing almost out of breath. Walking inside I was holding my head. I couldn't see. Wobbling and trying to cry I was going to get medical attention.I didn't think I was going to make it. What happened to me? Let me tell you.

    Putting the reader at the climax of the story.

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  5. Allison M.September 20, 2012 at 3:21 PM

    Start with a riddle

    When you are in 5th grade, ready to go on a feild trip, bags are packed where are you going? You guessed it Wolf Ridge.

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  6. AnonymousSeptember 20, 2012 at 3:36 PM

    Start with an intersting question


    Who knows what its like to stand on a single rope 20 feet in the air? I do.

    Jack Zutter

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    1. Megan McDermottSeptember 20, 2012 at 3:43 PM

      Scary! I can't wait to read the rest of the essay in a few weeks!

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    2. Gavin VogtSeptember 20, 2012 at 3:56 PM

      I do...
      Are you talking about wolfridge?

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  7. Gavin VogtSeptember 20, 2012 at 3:54 PM

    Operation: Spaceprobe was the kind of mission that would usually go without the Bloodthirsty galaloopians engaging in a dogfight.

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  8. Tia PetersonSeptember 20, 2012 at 7:38 PM

    Though the bus ride was tedious, it was the only way to get to the campus located in the middle of no where.

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  9. Jake MartinSeptember 20, 2012 at 7:43 PM

    A strip of adjectives


    scared,excited,and impatient are the feelings I get when I walk into elemtary school all at the same time.

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    1. Megan McDermottSeptember 20, 2012 at 7:46 PM

      Where's your capital letter at the beginning of your sentence, Jake? :)

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  10. Sydney J.September 20, 2012 at 7:46 PM

    Start off with an interesting question

    Have you ever stared down at the ground 20 feet in the air? I have.



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    1. Megan McDermottSeptember 20, 2012 at 7:54 PM

      No! I'm afraid of heights. I'll just have to read about it in your paper!

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    2. Ashly KSeptember 20, 2012 at 9:40 PM

      Wow Sydney nice start!

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  11. Jordyn TrogSeptember 20, 2012 at 7:46 PM

    Though I had to get up early, it was worth the amazing adventure.

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  12. Natalia StavitskayaSeptember 20, 2012 at 7:50 PM

    Start with a question.
    Have you ever wondered what elementary school was like to other kids? Well get comfy and get ready to listen to my story about my 5 years in elementary!

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  13. Kaitlyn JenkinsSeptember 20, 2012 at 9:19 PM

    #6

    I was the kind of girl that never got homesick.

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    1. Megan McDermottSeptember 21, 2012 at 7:38 AM

      Awww, this is great! I can't wait to read the actual essay!

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  14. AnonymousSeptember 20, 2012 at 9:21 PM

    Use a string of adjectives

    Scared,Frigtend,Excited before I go down on the high zip line

    Kaitlyn Russell

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  15. Brendan SSeptember 20, 2012 at 9:24 PM

    Start with a riddle.
    Have you ever thought about what its like to sing in front of a huge crowd even though your not a good singer? Well believe me! I have!

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  16. Ashly kSeptember 20, 2012 at 9:37 PM

    I am doing the blank was the kind of blank that blank.

    I was the kind of person that hated to get up early in the morning.Until I knew it was going to be the best day of my life!

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  17. Casey G.September 20, 2012 at 9:59 PM

    Metephor/Simile

    In recess, the small patch of run-down grass was an NFL stadium as legendary as Lambue Feild itself.

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    1. Megan McDermottSeptember 21, 2012 at 7:42 AM

      Legendary! Love it! Have you ever been to Lambeau Field?

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  18. Ellie VSeptember 21, 2012 at 6:44 AM

    I am doing #9.
    The only thing stopping me from falling 30ft is a thin wire and a harness, I could fall at any moment. Let me tell you about it.

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  19. AnonymousSeptember 21, 2012 at 7:48 AM

    #3 Start with a qusetion

    Do you think he will ever fall ? Well when his friend pushed him he just flew like an eagle in the sky.

    Haley Rodewald

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  20. Alex SandlerSeptember 23, 2012 at 3:21 PM

    #8 Use adjectives.
    It was very cloudy outside, and I was very excited! For it was the perfect day for white water rafting. The rapids were amazing.

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  21. Grant skluzacekSeptember 24, 2012 at 2:44 PM

    It was a stormy night was the kind of storm that would shock your house and tell the morning.

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  22. Sydney RSeptember 24, 2012 at 4:50 PM

    My favorite hook is the start with a interesting question. Have you ever been dangling 20 feet up int the air?

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  23. Chris johnsonSeptember 24, 2012 at 8:46 PM

    Waking up to the cold air on an ealry moring at wolf ridge.Iam rested a engough to handle the day i hope soo......

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  24. Jake SwedbergOctober 22, 2012 at 8:59 PM

    People laughing so hard their eyes were bulging out of their heads!

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